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The Leading King
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The Leading King
The leading King
He dances on ground
Such exquisite elegance
Where the water falls high
Draping over his
Like a tattered curtain

They answer the call
The fall roars louder and louder
As his beating heart
Returns what is his
Swirling as a vortex
Shade of calm and peace

The power rises
Searching for weakness
None is visible
Spirits whispers growing
Cascading the coming cry
Splaying their shadows

A scene so perfect
That is captured
In words smooth as he
An angle, so dark
Never minding forever happy
Loosing yourself in his eye

He stops to stare
Eyes of glowing ember
Body of tightening hunger
Lingering to another for a taste
Fading, always aboard
He is our, my leading King.

"My love is like a rose divided into two; the leaves I give to others, but the rose I give to you."

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2009-08-13 6:19
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Re: The Leading King
Very nice! <!-- sSmile --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_smile.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!-- sSmile -->
I hope you contribute more.

"Give to me a moment, and I will offer you eternity."- Sariel
2009-08-14 18:07
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Thank you! <!-- sSmile --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_smile.gif" alt=":)" title="Smile" /><!-- sSmile -->

"My love is like a rose divided into two; the leaves I give to others, but the rose I give to you."

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2009-08-18 18:30
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