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Short Rhyme
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Short Rhyme
Ok…I’m about as un-poetic as you can get , I’m more about short stories and such , but I can remember a good many years ago this just jumped into my head one night …

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Dancing on the edge of a Razor Blade ...

Demons to the left of me ..And angels to the right

Doesn’t matter who gets me ..I've been dancing all night

One side wants to save me and send me to the Light

The other wants to damn me and keep me safely in the night

There are choice’s to be had and choice’s to be made

But I’m the one who's dancing on that fu**ing Razor Blade
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2009-08-03 19:39
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This is cute, I enjoyed the rhythm of it. And the line "Demons to the left of me ..And angels to the right" sounds just like song lyrics "clowns to the left of me, jokers to the right, stuck in the middle with you." <!-- s:lol: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_lol.gif" alt=":lol:" title="Laughing" /><!-- s:lol: -->

Also, I think you meant damn, not dam. (Beavers can be mean, but not regarding eternal torment!) Also, it should read choices, not choice's. Just grammatical changes.

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2009-08-03 19:52
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got that song stuck in my head now <!-- s:lol: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_lol.gif" alt=":lol:" title="Laughing" /><!-- s:lol: -->
2009-08-03 20:22
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JDRage Wrote:Wink

got that song stuck in my head now <!-- s:lol: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_lol.gif" alt=":lol:" title="Laughing" /><!-- s:lol: -->

*sings* "Demons to the left of me, angels to the right, here I am, stuck in the middle of OKP!"

EDIT: Now I'm in the mood to write an Otherkin-themed song! <!-- s:lol: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_lol.gif" alt=":lol:" title="Laughing" /><!-- s:lol: -->

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